Thank you for your comment on my StoryBook and also my stories and introduction in the past. Your comment on my StoryBook gave me a good boost and assured me that I can keep going with my project and make it better. I appreciate you.
First of all, this is a great picture to set up your storybook. I think it provides a great foundation and glimpse into what type of storybook this one is. I think it really sets the mood. I love leather and I love journals, so I identify strongly with the photo. After that, I like the way that you introduce the story. You’re a great writer, and I really appreciate your writing style. I’m a huge fan of your introduction, because it really sets up a desire for the reader to find out what the story is about. After reading through your stories, I can tell you that I really enjoyed them. I think that you did yourself a favor by allowing yourself to write from the first person. It’s a perspective that allows the writer to really communicate to the reader what the characters are thinking. Also, the photos are quite illustrious in relationship to the stories. I think they coincide really well with the message you are trying to communicate. Also, I love the sense of mystery that your stories provide and I am really looking forward to seeing how you decide to end up finishing them! Great job!
Hey Avi, great concept to do your storybook over! I think you have the right idea in mind and you are doing a great job portraying all of that in your book. I really liked the picture you chose because it gives the readers the right idea while reading the stories. I love how you chose to do it in a journal like format that is really interesting and pleasing as a reader. I must say you are a great writer! I enjoyed reading the introduction and I liked how you wrote the intro and gave the glimpse of what is about to come, which is super exciting for us readers. I think you are doing a great job with your stories and concepts so far and you have the right idea! I would maybe keep using great pictures like you have been before because they give us great insight! I like the mystery you included within your stories because that makes us readers want to come back and read more of your stories! I think your storybook is solid and I would just keep up the good work! I enjoyed reading your stories so far and would love to see what you have worked on for the next one! Good job!
Hi Avi. I would like to thank you for all your comments on my posts this semester. I really enjoyed your feedback and your comments really helped me know that my content wasn't absolutely terrible. Good luck with finals.
Hey Avi! I just wanted to say Thank you. Your comments were great and they really helped make my posts better.
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ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment on my StoryBook and also my stories and introduction in the past. Your comment on my StoryBook gave me a good boost and assured me that I can keep going with my project and make it better. I appreciate you.
First of all, this is a great picture to set up your storybook. I think it provides a great foundation and glimpse into what type of storybook this one is. I think it really sets the mood. I love leather and I love journals, so I identify strongly with the photo. After that, I like the way that you introduce the story. You’re a great writer, and I really appreciate your writing style. I’m a huge fan of your introduction, because it really sets up a desire for the reader to find out what the story is about.
ReplyDeleteAfter reading through your stories, I can tell you that I really enjoyed them. I think that you did yourself a favor by allowing yourself to write from the first person. It’s a perspective that allows the writer to really communicate to the reader what the characters are thinking. Also, the photos are quite illustrious in relationship to the stories. I think they coincide really well with the message you are trying to communicate. Also, I love the sense of mystery that your stories provide and I am really looking forward to seeing how you decide to end up finishing them! Great job!
Hey Avi, great concept to do your storybook over! I think you have the right idea in mind and you are doing a great job portraying all of that in your book. I really liked the picture you chose because it gives the readers the right idea while reading the stories. I love how you chose to do it in a journal like format that is really interesting and pleasing as a reader. I must say you are a great writer! I enjoyed reading the introduction and I liked how you wrote the intro and gave the glimpse of what is about to come, which is super exciting for us readers. I think you are doing a great job with your stories and concepts so far and you have the right idea! I would maybe keep using great pictures like you have been before because they give us great insight! I like the mystery you included within your stories because that makes us readers want to come back and read more of your stories! I think your storybook is solid and I would just keep up the good work! I enjoyed reading your stories so far and would love to see what you have worked on for the next one! Good job!
ReplyDeleteHey Avi, I really appreciate all the comments you've left on my posts. Hope your semester ends well.
ReplyDeleteHi Avi. I would like to thank you for all your comments on my posts this semester. I really enjoyed your feedback and your comments really helped me know that my content wasn't absolutely terrible. Good luck with finals.
ReplyDeleteHi Avi! Thank you for all your comments this semester. they really helped make my posts better!
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